I love your layout of the groups of type. You still need to go in and "hang" the punctuation on the little side notes so that that the quote mark on the left side is not lined up with the first letter of the second line. Since we haven't really seen the newer version with the timing, jsut make sure you double and triple check things are in the right spot.
I like your layout, and the moods. But the speech doesn't match your motion. and I think that your previous beginning was really nice, and you can apply it to this one. I mean a moving numbers in black plane background version.
Your consitancy in your transitions is really gtreat. It helps hold the whole video together. I agree that the use of quotes is nice, but I wonder what it would look like if they were in grey instead of black. It might help separate them a bit more from the main part of the speech.
Love the song, but you might turn it down a bit. The timing was off when I played it because my computer sucks, so maybe if it lined up the music wouldn't be as distracting. Looks great though. The alignment of the type looks good.
I know the timing is off so I will just talk about the text. I really like the way you are using so many different type sizes and making the transitions very interesting to make it fun and keeps my attention!
You have such good movement, I love how my eye is never stuck in the same place. I would do your green color a little bit darker, but thats the only thing I would change!
I like the variation of type sizes and colors. The words move in a choppy and fast pace, much like his speaking habits.
ReplyDeleteI love your layout of the groups of type. You still need to go in and "hang" the punctuation on the little side notes so that that the quote mark on the left side is not lined up with the first letter of the second line. Since we haven't really seen the newer version with the timing, jsut make sure you double and triple check things are in the right spot.
ReplyDeleteI still love the little quotes that pop up, it really captures the way he speaks. Thanks for making them a little bit slower!
ReplyDeleteI like your layout, and the moods.
ReplyDeleteBut the speech doesn't match your motion.
and I think that your previous beginning was really nice, and you can apply it to this one.
I mean a moving numbers in black plane background version.
i like the movement that happens throughout
ReplyDeletegood use of movement, and capturing his tone of voice and how he is speaking.
ReplyDeleteI like the numbers going faster at the beginning. "Nice timing!" :P
ReplyDeleteAnyway, looks good. and I agree with everyone else. Nice movement.
Good Job!
Your consitancy in your transitions is really gtreat. It helps hold the whole video together. I agree that the use of quotes is nice, but I wonder what it would look like if they were in grey instead of black. It might help separate them a bit more from the main part of the speech.
ReplyDeleteLove the song, but you might turn it down a bit. The timing was off when I played it because my computer sucks, so maybe if it lined up the music wouldn't be as distracting. Looks great though. The alignment of the type looks good.
ReplyDeleteI think once you get the timing right it will work really well. I like the song a lot but agree with Carly in maybe trying to turn it down a bit.
ReplyDeleteI know the timing is off so I will just talk about the text. I really like the way you are using so many different type sizes and making the transitions very interesting to make it fun and keeps my attention!
ReplyDeleteEverything looks good, just get the timing down and it will be great.
ReplyDeleteYou have such good movement, I love how my eye is never stuck in the same place. I would do your green color a little bit darker, but thats the only thing I would change!
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